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©2007-2009 ~Aasmund
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A work in progress of my friend and classmate Ida ([link]). The photograph was shot in the studio at my school and it is a great chance that I'll use it in a school project. I used my Canon EOS 40D, a flash and a gigantic softbox.
If anyone got ideas on how I can improve the photograph, or just think it's amazing (:P), leave a comment!

EDIT: I have might "oversmugded" it some. I'll see if I can do something about that.

EDIT 2: More than 80 views in 5 minutes, can't say that's bad:P

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:iconr21:
WHAT IMPROVEMENT IS NEEDED?

ITS GREAT AS IS!!!
:icondarthenjoy:
Great on ;)
For improving this one try to take your shoot a little bit higher on a chair maybe or littler more in a lower position to increase the effect you have here

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:iconthewheelman84:
Its really a very good photo. I cant see too much to improve upon it. Great job.

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:iconaasmund:
Thank you very much:D
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I dont know if I have time to shoot it again, but if i do, I'll try that;) The angle was actually not planned. I was standing behind the softbox and just tried to get as high as i could without getting it in the frame.
:iconaasmund:
Thank you very much!
:iconfaroffmemory:
Bra jobba Åsmund ;) Syns ikke det er oversmudged.. syns du kunne crop'a det bittelitt.. men eller's dritbra ;)
:iconsteffengraph:
Din jææævla fotonerd Åsmund! Dritbra bilde ass... Du blir berømt for bildene dine en dag...

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:iconaasmund:
Takker:D Croppe litt sånn at det ikke blir så mye luft over hodet liksom?

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Canon
Canon EOS 40D
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F/14.0
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Oct 31, 2007, 1:51:10 PM

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